Translation © by Garrett Medlock

Rima
Language: Spanish (Español) 
Available translation(s): ENG FRE
Te vi un punto y flotando ante mis ojos
la imagen de tus ojos se quedó,
como la mancha oscura orlada en fuego
que flota y ciega si se mira al sol.

Adondequiera que la vista fijo
torno a ver sus pupilas llamear;
mas no te encuentro a tí, que es tu mirada,
unos ojos, los tuyos, nada más.

De mi alcoba en al angulo los miro
desasidos fantásticos lucir:
cuando duermo los siento que se ciernen
de par en par abiertos sobre mí.

Yo sé que hay fuegos fatuos que en la noche
llevan al caminante a perecer:
yo me siento arrastrado por tus ojos,
pero adónde me arrastran no lo sé.

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Available translations, adaptations or excerpts, and transliterations (if applicable):

  • ENG English (Garrett Medlock) , "Poem", copyright © 2020, (re)printed on this website with kind permission
  • FRE French (Français) (Guy Laffaille) , "Rime", copyright © 2017, (re)printed on this website with kind permission


Research team for this text: Barbara Miller , Garrett Medlock [Guest Editor]

This text was added to the website: 2004-04-18
Line count: 16
Word count: 113

Poem
Language: English  after the Spanish (Español) 
I saw you, a spot, and floating before my eyes
the image of your eyes remained,
like the dark stain trimmed [with] fire
which floats and blinds [you] if [you look] at the sun.

Wherever [my] sight focuses,
I turn to see your pupils blazing;
but I do not find you, it is your gaze,
[a pair of] eyes, your eyes, [and] nothing more.

From my bedroom in the corner I watch them
shine, freely, fantastically:
when I sleep I feel them loom, 
wide-open, over me.

I know that there are fatuous flames which in the night
take the walker to perish:
I feel myself pulled by your eyes,
but I know not where they are pulling me.

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This text was added to the website: 2020-06-28
Line count: 16
Word count: 118